Audience Feedback

We showcased our film in assembly and this is the feeback we got.

We had a lot of posative feedback, one of the things that a lot of people said was that they got the pliot of the story after watching which is a good thing as we wanted them to understand what was going on.

These are a few things they said:

• A good use of shots within the montage of shots.
• A few basic editing techniques however there were a few editing techniques that made the piece effective.
• Maybe upgrade the camera.
• They got the plot of the story
• They wanted to keep watching the rest.

After the feedback given my group let them know about the restricted recourses we were given at the start of the year and what we had to work with.

Note to the Examiner

Hi, may name is Ollie and i have been working in a group to produce this film. I took the lead on editing which i have never done before and i have really enjoyed the experience. Below is our film "CLOSE CUT", the film is about a paranoid schizophrenic with an obsesion of teenaged girls hair. His objective is to collect the hair and addmire it in his enclosed little room.
Thanks for your  time hope you enjoyed!